hey guys its Dayzharn here and i have been working on our chalenge the lockdown poetry i have done the Haiku and tongue twister and last post i made a maths poetry so check that out on my blog aswell if you want too.(By Dayzharn)
Wednesday, August 25, 2021
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Hi Dayzharn,
ReplyDeleteWow what a mouthful your tongue twister was! It was very tricky to say 5times fast! Which is your favourite kind of poem to write?
I hope you are enjoying your time at home with your whanau!
Miss Ferguson
my favourite poem is the countdown i'm working on that
DeleteHi Dayzharn,
ReplyDeleteWell done on creating a Haiku and tongue twister. It is hard to get the exact number of syllables in each line and you've done a great job :)
I look forward to seeing your other poems too!
thanks Mrs Lee im working on a acrostic one aswell to add to it
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Hi Dayzharn,
ReplyDeleteI got my kids to see if they could say this tongue twister x5 times...haha, nope! Well done Dayzharn, I had a laugh (at their expense!)
I'm keen to, to see what else you have..,this may be a hidden talent!
I hope you've enjoyed looking a poetry & are staying safe & active in your bubble.
Thanks Dayzharn
Hi Dayzharn, Ka Pai!! What great poems, my favourite is definitely the sound poem, it all rhymes and with lots of onomatopoeia words, it is awesome, especially when you say it out loud. How long did it take you to write? You are a poet and you we didn't know it ha ha! Keep up the great work Dayzharn. Hope your bubble has a lovely weekend. Michelle
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